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Poet’s Corner

URBAN METRO FREEDOM

28-01-2008

The Stirrer’s poet laureate Brendan Hawthorne muses on the litter-strewn, muck-stained streets of his Black Country neighbourhood.

Our urban metro pavements

are paved with broken beer bottles

thoughtlessly smashed

within designated alcohol-free zones

Our urban metro pavements

are awash with litter falling from

over-flowing council bins in

recognised litter-free zones

Our urban metro pavements

are take-away pigeon run feeding stations

in non-designated

bye-law drop zones

Our urban metro pavements

are lined in double yellow and

fenced in by prohibition signage

in car-free pedestrian zones

Our urban metro pavements

take us past the elderly victims of muggers

and along shoplifter rabbit runs before

leading us to boarded up ram-raid shop fronts

in police-free patrol zones

A hot-spot where tape-free videos bleep unheard

through the wail of intruder alarms

as seen through camera eyes

that have no memory or

re-call of defining clarity

resulting in insufficient evidence

Our urban metro pavements

are coated with chewing gum and dog excrement

occasionally sprinkled with gutter needles

in those blue light drug-free zones

Sadly corralled by badly-spelt graffiti

on monument walls

we walk in blinkered silence

Our urban metro pavements

lead us to failing outdoor market zones

where the corrugated roofs

of tin-town town-ships are left

rattling in the breeze

two months down from the re-fit line

and a million miles from craftsmanship

And yet some of us still need to question

whether it’s all down to falling standards

or maybe it’s just another perception in

the opinion-free zone

where people are allowed to wander

conscience-free

in an environment

where underlying trends go unnoticed

or ignored

and rules roam

free from meaning

and endorsement

Copyright Brendan Hawthorne 2008

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